Can you give feedback to my peers/classmate (follow the red guide

Please remember that you earn points for the substantive classmate responses you make:

Substantive and constructive participation in discussion: responded to at least two classmates with feedback and comments.

I want to see you earn top points, so be sure that your comments are substantive and well developed.

Are you looking for ways to make your responses to others more substantive?

Remember, a substantive post does not simply state “I agree with your comment” or “I like what you said.” It moves the conversation forward. 

Here are some thought starters that you might consider:

What would happen if…

Other times it may be helpful to… 

It is my understanding… what has been your experience with this?

Another thought on this might be to approach it from…

Is it possible that?…

Would you consider?

Maybe…

Possibly…

Sometimes…

I am wondering if….

Do you think?…

Perhaps…

I have had a similar experience….

Could you say more about….

What do you think about?……

 

I have chosen these two beach images. In the first photo you can only see a little bit of the water it’s a little deep blue there is people on the beach with umbrellas and the trees are close. The second photo you can also see the people on the beach with the umbrellas the trees also show and you see the water. Both images have these things in common. They really don’t have too much comparison.

 

These two photos have some differences most likely. The first photo the sand is a different color than the second photos sand its more yellow and the other is more white. The first photos water shows just a little bit its more deep blue than the second photos water shows a lot more it starts with light to dark blue water. The first photo doesn’t show any boats or jet skis but the second photo shows a lot of boat and water atv action. I couldn’t explain too many comparisons about these two images like I did with differences.